! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Flight To Nowhere - Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Flight To Nowhere - Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.7


birds cross continents,
In hope of wamth and fields;
Stunned, look at concrete....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandesh Shinde 31 May 2009

Great idea. Could be expended.

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Sandra Martyres 31 May 2009

Nice one Mamta...great imagery

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Ashraful Musaddeq 31 May 2009

This is so nice that it might be observed through 3rd eye! Beautiful 10+++

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Nikunj Sharma 26 June 2009

having stayed in delhi and bombay........... i agree, poor birds.... read my poem called MY DREAM and send ur comments

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a fine haiku....nature is stunned by our growth

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Surya . 07 June 2009

oh! i am stunned now. u r talking about environment degradation.nice voted10 surya

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Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2009

a haiku should be able to bring in something striking on its last line as if spotted, on the switching on of a light stunning image Mamta...10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 31 May 2009

Oh Birds, dont cross continents for a sake of happiness- For happiness lies within...................A Good Write........

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