A Fine Line Poem by Audrey Heller

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Audrey Heller

Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida

A Fine Line

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There's a fine line, between patience and
obstinacy. If you put too much pressure on
someone, you inadvertently, can store up
a hornets nest. Under the circumstances,
wouldn't it be wiser, to wait a while and
give it a rest? You'll not make it any better,
by being persistent, as it can have it's
repercussions, to be sure. Let time pass
for a while and the person you're interested
in, will stop being demure. Everything takes
time and being kind to others, starts with you
first. When you have accomplished that, you
no longer will feel, that hunger and thirst!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 April 2009

There's a fine line, between patience and obstinacy......Good Write.................Message to be taken home.............

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

Wonderful poem. Love with 10.

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Antonio Liao 04 September 2008

yah... the beginning is the end of another beginning... the starting point is thyself i admired your vision of thought in every line you say... no other fine line than make our own fine line... a 10 point of this very powerful fine line... thank you

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Audrey Heller

Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida
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