A Few Degrees Of Heat Poem by James Mills

A Few Degrees Of Heat

Rating: 4.8


A slope of rising road
gains on the pair of us -
forcing silence.
Dusty birds and drunken bees
seem dazzled and frustrated
in the grating heat.
Wings and feathers
weather the jagged day
in short bursts and slowly.
Our imaginations fail,
again, to summon cool times.

Summer aggravates.
Midges bite and die;
spent on your glistening skin.

Blisters bubble;
subcutaneous lakes of irritation
itching like the scumbled day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 22 June 2005

Very well done, James...but I don't know what scumbled means, either. I'm going straight to me dictionary. Raynette

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E. Nelson 18 May 2005

This is burning, unsettling surrealism...it gets right down into my gut. I don't know meterless free-verse as well as I might, but this really does what a poem should.

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Amberlee Carter 16 May 2005

well, this is quite creative...I like it!

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Laura Cummings 09 May 2005

ooo i like :) Its defo original

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