A Feeling For Snow Poem by Adryan Barnathan

A Feeling For Snow

Rating: 4.0


seemingly dancing
on blank snow,
flecks illuminate light
generating warmth
in the hearth
of one's life stone
where fiery coal burns
internally
mined by a harbinger
holding the breath
of one's own body and soul-
riding on currents of
rebirth, in winter

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 29 July 2005

I like the sound of the poem, the short lines, and it is different to think of rebirth in winter.

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Duncan Wyllie 24 March 2006

This is cleansing and so important a lesson in any season.Love Duncan

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David Gerardino 30 December 2005

NICE POEM...................................

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Michael Whitt 07 December 2005

'...riding the currents of rebirth...' yea.....!

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Raynette Eitel 17 September 2005

This is the first of your work I've read, Adrienne, and so now I want to read it all, slowly, savoring each word. Thanks. Raynette

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Suitcase Girl 31 August 2005

This is beautiful. My favourite from what I have read of yours so far!

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