A Feeling Poem by Ayesha iSha
A Feeling
I am alone
Flustered
Helpless
Trapped in the box
Behind the walls
In the well
Under water
Suffocated
Dying second by second
Wednesday, July 9, 2008
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Evolved Indian
09 July 2008
'wish to feel that hand so soft and caring freeing me and taking me to her ever asuring world..' I thoought you could hv added the above.... Nice reading
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4/23/2024 9:41:40 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The feeling of suffocation is offspring of loneliness. A nice and compact poem, Ayesha, but the line ' Behind the walls ' is unnecessary. Best Wishes. Naseer