A Fear Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

A Fear

Rating: 3.0


it causes that the heart
is beating more quickly
at the rhythm familiar to oneself
you are shaking and are sweating
you cannot make the footstep

it is slowly drawing you
you are dropping in like
the animal into snares
which it crammed. already
has you in its possession

you are afraid and are shivering
you are freezing to the spot
it is only waiting for it
is goggling large eyes
is clenching the throat is growing

look into the window, isn't of what
to be afraid because, everything is
in its place: the same dome above you
in the day with blue, at night with the
grenade clad, people, the tree, birds

everyday life of the day bringing
surprises.you can win something
as a good lottery ticket and don't
be afraid is, at arm's length distance
perhaps meant only for you

everything is possible

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 31 July 2009

you are afraid and are shivering you are freezing to the spot it is only waiting for it is goggling large eyes is clenching the throat is growing the selection of words and the way of expression is perfect and the rhythmic way of writing shows that, you know the baseics of poetry to make.. i enjoyedit and let me say, you are really a good poem with sweet andmeaninful thought...appreciate you..

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Fluent, beautiful, well penned.10.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 26 June 2009

Very good poem. With pleasure I am giving 10 v. :)

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