A Fairy Tale: Prologue Poem by kite remedy

A Fairy Tale: Prologue

Rating: 3.1


He dragged his feet behind her,
from a heaven where they were
since everything did fail,
in this erroneous fairy tale..

The book started with a scene,
when the princess did her sin.
An exile was a punishment
and then there went the predicament..

Next page filled with a view
of a land where birds flew
and danced between the flowers,
as a ball on kingdom's floor..

Sat a man by a cedar tree,
tired did he seems to be
and sang a song as his remedy
and ended it heartily in no glee..

Little did he knows of his love,
of where it is and was before.
And of what he thought he knew,
he heard of a bird ridiculed..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 03 January 2009

An enjoyable tale! Congrats!

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Reshma Ramesh 15 December 2008

well penned.......................

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Min Sia 14 December 2008

Very well narrated..fine imagery..can't wait for the next part! Really beautiful..A 10+++! Thanks for sharing...

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<font color =fusha>Amy 14 December 2008

fantastic poem, i really enjoyed reading this thanks for sharing 10!

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Fiona Davidson 14 December 2008

Well written piece....lovely...can't wait to read the next part....

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