A Fairy's Touch Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Fairy's Touch

Rating: 4.0


Faint fairy out of fantasy,
Draws out its slender wand
To touch the heart in its warm stead,
So to keep it running bright
Like the summer coming straight,
Quick within like an ocean
In its watery joy.
Into it to sink deep in the heart,
Where the glow charts
Brightness to get the vibrancy.
The smile from the light being
Shows satisfaction.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cindy Kreiner Sera 29 May 2009

Enchanting, love the use of a fairy...very good write Obinna

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Winnie Angel 29 May 2009

a charming write......

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Jack Price 05 July 2009

One word, one thought: whimsical. great imagination put together into a nice little poem.

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Surya . 24 July 2009

beautiful poem.the words are meaningful too.wonderfull imagination.enjoyed reading this poem. voted10 surya

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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 16 August 2009

Nice.. you're a perfect poet...

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Eche Ononukwe 12 October 2011

It's a powerful description with strong imageries. Economy of words is your key.I love the flow & the rendering.A good Romantic lyricist you are.Great work!

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David Beckham 31 July 2010

I wish I had a fairy. Nice poem

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Ken E Hall 07 March 2010

Your fairy wand is your poem.....excellentm....++10 regards

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Lorenzo Costigliolo 10 November 2009

Faint fairy out of fantasy, Draws out its slender wand To touch the heart in its warm stead, So to keep it running bright Like the summer coming straight, Quick within like an ocean In its watery joy. Into it to sink deep in the heart, Where the glow charts Brightness to get the vibrancy. The smile from the light being Shows satisfaction. Effective alliteration and imagery create a wondrous introduction. The remainder becomes a stream of conscious perception of a brightness attempting to emerge from a hazy existence followed by a smile at its inception. Clarity got lost in the forest of similes. The last line is a climax to a crescendo that didn't develop.

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Obinna Eruchie 07 November 2009

Clarence Brown (11/6/2009 12: 19: 00 PM) I loved a fairy's touch ---------- wonderful. I have always imagined it so.

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