A Fact Of Life Poem by Romeo Della Valle

i can see that in a way this is not a free verse or is it? anyway, you have expressed and written this poem using an intellectual approach... in a way it has a humanistic value... so i can say that this poem is really good. after i send you this comment, i'll rate this one 10

We all are criminals without a crime in this lopsided World and Romeo you know the fact of life exactly.

The fact of life has many interpretations and this is one, only it is defined in a complex way but in the form of an art, truly by a brilliant artist. What I observed also is that all the lines runs smoothly, no flaws that I could detect. Splendid and a 10+

My truant spirit to return To the daily education Required of a mortal To learn and overcome with completion., , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , and the way life sways by time and space prevailing upon, yet flow of of life certainly needs its belonging in its own way, quite introspective as when ingenious,10+++, thanks for sharing

an introspective poem...sounds simple with a good depth...loved the message in it

a great write Romeo. Your one of the best dear friend

I like the last two sentences!

I really like the second part. Well-expressed

Nobody said life was going to be hard! ! ! - sometimes it feels like it wasnt worth being born in these times! ! I liked this a lot! ! ! keep 'em coming.

amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! lol! ! ! ! I just learnt some new facts of life nice poem dear Romeo -10 anjali (do read my latest MY TRUTH - YOUR LIES)