Make a wish
While you drink like a fish
Maybe the lady in red
Will descend on your lips with a kiss
Before the bouncer throws you out
Of the club in one piece
Copyright 2006 - Sylvia Chidi
As a Scot, this could be our national anthem! Slainte mhath (cheers) . Thankyou for your comments on my work, it is much appreciated. Hugs Anna xxx
Naw. Let the bouncer have someone collect up all the pieces! Drinking like a fish...Hmmmm. I could make comments so much easier! The lady in red weighs 400lbs...so, indeed, let her kiss him. This is a funny, anytime poem. It just was read when I needed more caffeine...now, I don't. Goody one! xxElysabeth
Ha Ha - very nice, Instead of that lady's beautiful kiss I will be totally dismissed...........
Hi Sylvia, The Bacchanalian cries beckons.... I'll drink to that Perhaps it's worth the throw from the bouncer Cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I'll drink to that! Phillip