A Drinkers Wish Poem by Sylvia Chidi

A Drinkers Wish

Rating: 4.2


Make a wish
While you drink like a fish
Maybe the lady in red
Will descend on your lips with a kiss
Before the bouncer throws you out
Of the club in one piece

Copyright 2006 - Sylvia Chidi

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Phillip Sawatzky 12 February 2006

I'll drink to that! Phillip

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Shogunoka Ledesma III 16 February 2006

Simply intoxicating...

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Anna Russell 19 February 2006

As a Scot, this could be our national anthem! Slainte mhath (cheers) . Thankyou for your comments on my work, it is much appreciated. Hugs Anna xxx

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Linda Preston 25 February 2006

Nice lighthearted verse.

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Elysabeth Faslund 30 June 2007

Naw. Let the bouncer have someone collect up all the pieces! Drinking like a fish...Hmmmm. I could make comments so much easier! The lady in red weighs 400lbs...so, indeed, let her kiss him. This is a funny, anytime poem. It just was read when I needed more caffeine...now, I don't. Goody one! xxElysabeth

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Amitava Sur 01 July 2014

Ha Ha - very nice, Instead of that lady's beautiful kiss I will be totally dismissed...........

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R.j. Wynn 01 May 2013

Beautiful poem, I love it.

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Walter Sanson Lotilla 07 September 2011

Hi Sylvia, The Bacchanalian cries beckons.... I'll drink to that Perhaps it's worth the throw from the bouncer Cheers

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Bob Blackwell 09 November 2008

So true a great big ten from Me.

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Sumita Datta 01 October 2008

My 10 goes for you....

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