A Dream Within A Dream, Poem by DEEP DARK SOUL POET

A Dream Within A Dream,

Rating: 2.5


A dream within a dream,
So lonely in the winter still;
Wishes going into the air stream,
To never again to fulfil.

A dream within loneliness,
The moments we once had;
The day is now flowerless,
Down this entire winter pad.

A dream within a stone,
So hard and cold of all;
The feeling when we are alone,
A day or two of appal.

A dream within the past,
From nights that were before;
The thoughts that didn't last,
And therefore are no more.

A dream within a reach,
That once was staying here;
And nothing left to teach,
Or nothing gave to share.

A dream within a thought,
That we once knew of some;
But time moved on or bought,
And never again is to come.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammed Jafer 10 April 2014

hey, there is a taste in your poem. your language is not difficult. Person from any country can read and enjoy your poems. Simply the best.

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Road Runner 12 December 2010

not very good. expected more from the deep dark poet name. don't give up your day job

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