Jayne Davies

Rookie - 190 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

A Dream View - Poem by Jayne Davies

I walked that path a thousand times,
To the mountain top I'd climb,
Leaving the village beneath me,
I'd hear those church bells chime.

Looking down the valley,
The sky a luscious blue,
Admiring this world around me,
A grand and special view.

The village I was born in,
This land I call my own,
The rows of terraced houses,
A community proudly grown.

The birds sing from the treetops,
The sun upon my face,
This is my favourite moment,
This is my special place.

Comments about A Dream View by Jayne Davies

  • Rookie - 190 Points Jayne Davies (4/29/2013 11:51:00 AM)

    Thanks for the lovely comment! I will read yours x (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Babatunde Aremu (4/25/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    I share in this nostalgia. The are early years in the village are always wonderful to remember. This reminds me of my poem: A Song To My Childhood Friends. Thanks for sharing and keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Jayne Davies (4/21/2013 1:14:00 PM)

    Thank you David! Glad you like it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,769 Points David Wood (4/21/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    A lovely poem Jayne with good imagery. I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

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