A Dream Or True Reality...? Poem by Afzal Shauq

Dream or real........we get confused when we find drifted values of man, and uplifting values of our loving pet animals......you may read mine..... A dream other than dreams.....you will enjoy that is similar to your ideas

And I know....I will postpone my dinner...I am far too occupied, very well penned..

i think this is not a dream and not the realty too...some men acts like animals but thay are not no one could say that they are animals cuz we all human beings and brothers too...Nice poem.

you translated it right? so good work but i think it's not a dream it's a nightmare +10

it's very odd but i truly like it well done.

Wow! This is really good! !

Great imagination in this composition. But it is scary to even think what would happen if this were to be true - that is - man tending to become an animal and animals getting transformed into human beings. Already in this world, there are examples to show that man is slowly losing his reasoning ability (as seen from barabaric acts of terrorism) - something that differentiates him from the animals.

10+ Again I would say your poem is wonderfully jolting the human consciousness! Very good write........critical smiles of amazing success....and were forwarding hand to hand towards...... the empty cities to occupy. DEAR FRIEND THIS MAY BECOME REALITY unless we come out of dream! Thanks for inviting.

Your poem shows us that man on the earth can also become beast in the fate of humanity. We either blame the world however we are also to blame. At the sight of devastation we become corrupted beasts with no control until we see the damage we've caused...

Excellent, , , , , , , but tell you it was your dream........... your imagination was well express, it happens in life sometime that your dream feel like its reality why you wake from your sleep than you know its not reality but just a dream nicely you wrote this poem........10++