Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 34 Points (26/05/1989)

A Dream - Poem by Jinal Oswal

I stand on the sea shore,
Looking at the sun which is staring back at me…

It was so clear like the atmosphere,
Round and red appearing to set….

It took me to my dreams, dreams where I was
Alive and Live,
Talking and Whispering,
Longing and Loving,
Caring and Sharing…..

Suddenly a wave touched my feet, it got me back,
Showed me the current world and asked me to get back to the track…………

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Comments about A Dream by Jinal Oswal

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sharad Juneja (4/20/2012 6:35:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem.. i loved i t (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Leather Sandal (1/16/2012 4:42:00 AM)

    This beautiful poem is vivid in my mind perceiving your moments and how fantastic
    just a tiny speck of a lifetime is. Your way of sharing this really made me sigh seeing the picture and then at the end feeling the wave....Thanks for sharing
    this beautiful moment in time......Hope you share much more (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,092 Points Hans Vr (9/15/2011 8:37:00 AM)

    You are capturing the moment wonderfully in these well writen lines. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 31, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 9, 2011

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