Treasure Island

Jinal Oswal

(26/05/1989)

A Dream


I stand on the sea shore,
Looking at the sun which is staring back at me…

It was so clear like the atmosphere,
Round and red appearing to set….

It took me to my dreams, dreams where I was
Alive and Live,
Talking and Whispering,
Longing and Loving,
Caring and Sharing…..

Suddenly a wave touched my feet, it got me back,
Showed me the current world and asked me to get back to the track…………

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Submitted: Monday, January 31, 2011
Edited: Friday, December 09, 2011

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  • Leather Sandal (1/16/2012 4:42:00 AM)

    This beautiful poem is vivid in my mind perceiving your moments and how fantastic
    just a tiny speck of a lifetime is. Your way of sharing this really made me sigh seeing the picture and then at the end feeling the wave....Thanks for sharing
    this beautiful moment in time......Hope you share much more (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (9/15/2011 8:37:00 AM)

    You are capturing the moment wonderfully in these well writen lines. (Report) Reply

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