A Dream? .. Poem by Elena Sandu

A Dream? ..

Rating: 3.8


Ten thousand times a day
To be gently touched
Lost smiles of mine
Searched, found, and made
To bloom again
Ten thousand times a day
With sweetest kisses to be marked
Ten thousand times a day
By one with sweetest soul
Of earth, that's you
My treasured man.
Then shall sit back
And have a rest
No need for measure
I'm giving back to you no less
Then ten thousand times a day
Sit tight and smile
delighted with my sweetest treat:
My love my heart my soul
All yours...
...Now...
Please hug me!
Cling tight on me:
The wood's old castle
I am now and you became
My Ivy.....

Saturday, April 24, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abnish Singh Chauahan 24 April 2010

an interesting poem/ full of emotions/ well written

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John Knight 28 April 2010

Hi Elena - welcome to Poemhunter - we are lovely people who share our love through our poetry. Dream Love is perfect Angel because we can cross all the boundaries of space and time and just - ENJOY. We all need to be touched and kissed Elena to make us bloom again. Love is always the sharing of our 'sweetest treats' and in Dream Love we can give ourselves completely every time - even ten thousand times! ! ! . Tight hugs are always on the menu. The similie of you as the castle being 'climbed up' by the ivy - as your lover is beautiful. Thanks for caring - thanks for sharing - Love through Poetry - JOHN

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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2010

That's sweet and inspiring...be it a dream or reality...captivating words...10

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Tom Billsborough 07 August 2016

Great image binds the poem with a fine climax. Good technique. Tom Billsborough

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Anthony Burkett 21 January 2014

capturing a moment of desire... fleeting... the true essence of desire... my complements dear poet!

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Rekha Mandagere 24 June 2011

Fine blend of love and devotion is displayed through out very gently. The man must be really very proud and secured with such a lovely hearted wife. My ten thousand times thanks for sharing such a powerful, eternal lovely poem. I give full 10.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 August 2010

No need for measure’ 'In romance measure Is but slasher Pales blusher Uh-ing usher’ ~ niv …excellent poetry finest feeling … thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Moonbee Canady 22 July 2010

Oh, This is a Jewel of a Write... such beautiful thoughts you have must come 10,000 Times A Day (smile) ... It flowed like a fantastic landscape... I enjoyed reading it throughout, especially the castle wall and clinging ivy part... ingenious! ... MoonBee

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