A Doll Of Clay (Being Inspired By Marie Shine's Poem Ecstasy) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Doll Of Clay (Being Inspired By Marie Shine's Poem Ecstasy)

Rating: 5.0


Love!
Thanks for relieving me from cares.
Love!
I shall wait for you in the next nightmares.
Thanks for relieving me from the pains.
I don't mind your given stains,
The ecstasy that you provide,
is followed by a will to abide
the fatigues of a new and tiring day,
after all I'm a doll of helpless clay!
Embraced in the arms let me forget the misses,
Come on sweetheart it; s a moment of kisses!

(Thanks Marie Shine, your poem is nice and inspiring, and I reacted with a poem.)

Thursday, November 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 27 November 2015

It is a wonderful thing about this site that allows poets to inspire and be inspired

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M Asim Nehal 27 November 2015

A superb poem on the life of doll made up of clay......You did it nicely I am yet to read the poem by Marie but after reading your poem I will will definitely read it as well....Thanks for sharing this poem...10

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Rajnish Manga 26 November 2015

Sentiments based on the life's realities, are beautifully expressed. To carry out the romance of life vis-a-vis our hardships is worth a lifetime of celebration. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.

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