A Dilettante Falls Victim To His Own Subjective Opinions Poem by Ted Sheridan

A Dilettante Falls Victim To His Own Subjective Opinions

Rating: 4.6


With his left hand
he slowly raises
his finely cut crystal glass
filled with a most expensive bourbon
to his dry and parted lips
as if to savor
more the finality
of the moment
than the distinct and full bouquet
of the distiller's
single barrel creation.
He gingerly sips his last drink
being very cautious
not to bruise the ice
while somewhere
in the blue hills of Kentucky
a bung is being popped
from yet another giant barrel.
When-
with the index finger
of his right hand
he releases the gun's trigger
of any guilt it may feel
for the obvious coldness
of its steel heart.
Life may not always be good
but you can't blame it on the bourbon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 05 July 2007

Now, let me see...can't blame the booze, can't blame the gun, can't blame the distiller, can't blame the poetic writer...somehow, I feel this poetic writer is holding up a mirror, and we can SEE who to blame...? ?

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Not a member No 4 07 June 2007

Tight, slick and edgy with a smile thrown in for good measure. Did he put the lid back on that bottle? This has a bit of a stylish kick about it! Fine work as usual Mr Ted. jim

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Dee Daffodil 19 February 2007

Wow! ! ! Amazing poem Ted! I really admire your writing. Hugs, Dee

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This is really, really good!

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