A Diary Two (La Isla Salsa) Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Diary Two (La Isla Salsa)

Rating: 3.1


(dedicated to JOE POEWHIT, a great poet at poemhunter)

through you, I have learned how to love again
you always make me smile when I am down
you are as loving as the shimmering angel

I would have fallen even more
without you at my side at each step
we went through some hard times, some joy times together

the messages you made just to tell me
how much you caring, thinking of me
helped me through harsh days

you taught me that I could do anything
you still encouraged me even when
you didn't agree with road I walked in

you didn't leave me while I was at the edge
I always had someone whom I could trust
and who patiently understood me

take my hand
and take my whole life too
what a wonderful world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Gale 11 February 2009

Appreciation between friends, it seems indeed.

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Subbaraman N V 12 February 2009

It is quite heartening that the poets as ambassadors of peace and love have their messages spread and are beautifully responded by the co poets!

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Wonderful poem its hard to love again after a heart break.. Nice poem Krista

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Muhammad Ali 12 February 2009

this one too is very nice very lovely. good art friend

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Ivor Hogg 12 February 2009

I applaud your attititude towrads fellow poets an the help we recieve from each other

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Allemagne Roßmann 05 October 2009

Venerative notes for a teacher's tribute you taught me that I could do anything you still encouraged me even when you didn't agree with road I walked in...................well done and well written....10 voted

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 May 2009

Moving composition, modest submission.

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Sandra Martyres 16 March 2009

Beautiful poem - a meaningful tribute

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Gargi Saha 24 February 2009

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

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Eyan Desir 18 February 2009

i think its a nice poem good write

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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