Jesus James Llorico

A Desert Life - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

As I watched the sunset in this land
And fading lights dims the desert sand
A time my memory seems so right
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Comments about A Desert Life by Jesus James Llorico

  • Gold Star - 50,204 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/27/2014 10:22:00 PM)

    This is such a poignant poem Jesus, touched my heart significantly. Yes, I too have lost my parents, and many other relatives whom I was close to. It is difficult to go on when they are a memory of yesterday, that you want to relive right now, again. Memories are always bittersweet when we no longer have the ones we love here on earth. Their images in our minds of good and happier times fill our hearts with joy, as tears spill from our eyes, because we can no longer live them on earth. Sorrow filling our hearts and minds with every moment we have lost in time. So touchingly sad, Jesus, yet a beautiful poem at the same time. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Veteran Poet - 1,479 Points Jesus James Llorico (10/28/2014 9:44:00 PM)

    I am very glad to know that someone feels the same way that I do and appreciates the emotions that drove me to write that poem.. Thank you very much for your comment Ma'm Roseann

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/3/2013 1:04:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem! Very true...warmth of a family matters most. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 385 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (3/6/2013 7:40:00 PM)

    Lovely and melodious, your poem fondly speaks of a glorious time of youth, the warmth and longing of family. One always cherishes those times and our memory keeps them safe.
    Keep up sharing your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,479 Points Jesus James Llorico (2/23/2013 7:45:00 PM)

    thank you Mr. Mishra, this is the first poem I submitted and I want to do more, your comment is really appreciated. yes, I will read your poems and comments. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,880 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/22/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    We should remember the sun is not setting it is our earth that is moving.. As such we are not dying our body is decaying. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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