A Decent Plot Poem by Michael Pruchnicki

A Decent Plot

Rating: 1.6


That's all he wanted
when he rented a movie
or paid his way
at the local cinema
or read a book
recommended
by a friend or a review

That's not much to want
in this war-torn world
beset by all manner
of catastrophe
from catarrh to cancer

When his time came
he was properly interred
in a faux bronze coffin
in a decent plot
marked by marble
and mourned
by members
of his menage
along with other relics
of free verse

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
I Am Charlie 13 June 2009

faux bronze?

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David Desantis 14 April 2008

wow man, really nice. A few different levels to this poem that made me shift my mindset a few times. First I was stuck on the movie theme, and then the graveyard, and then back to you the author, describing a 'relic of free verse'. This is definately a poem I'll remember. You have real talent. I'd really like for you to see my work and let me know what you think, its rare to see so much talent on here.

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Abha Sharma 07 April 2008

the satire you have punched is touching....well composed.

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Goldy Locks 01 April 2008

pretty flippin awesome. nothin flippant about it. usually i've come to learn, ppl don't want a whole lot: respect, love, warmth. i like the double entendre of plot [burial and story]. best care, sjg

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