I have an err for passion when I will hit the road-
Oh! God how roses become fade!
Could you conceit?
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Musfiq us Shaleheen (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)
Poems by Musfiq us Shaleheen : 6 / 50
A Death Feeling
Passage departs every instant till death
I gratify to hold dear with earth's comeliness-
Oh! My darling red rose florescence's for you!
Is it the ease cadence of one else?
I have an err of passion while I will hit the road-
Oh! God how roses become fade!
Could you conceit?
Oh! God how much credence I grasp from you! !
Benevolence - Amour-Inspiration!
Time and tide hasten so zippy-
Thine devotion should be ended very soon.
-Shaleheen,7th December,2012
Musfiq us Shaleheen
Submitted: Thursday, December 06, 2012
Edited: Friday, April 05, 2013
Poems by Musfiq us Shaleheen : 6 / 50
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Very nice..Very deep too! :)
deep expression, nice concept of words usage........good write up
i certainly respect ur thoughts..its surely of high values..liked your poem very much
An expression with due respect to your thoughts and integrity of poetic concern. A good flight on the metaphysical wings!
Expression of heart!
so touching and admirable.
beyond all doubt we get all things from god,
but i think god's devotion wont end up.it lasts untill end...
love it~nb
Powerful emotions with lovely imagery, great write!
It's a mixture of old and new English. Anyway I like it. Keep on writing
Deep feelings passionately expressed. You may further reflect on you use thy or thine instead of you or your. Keep on writing, dear friend.