A Dead Dream Poem by Rahul Singh Rana

A Dead Dream

Rating: 4.6


So much pain
I smothered till date,
What about a life?
A life so grand,
A fiction still stands
But just in my mind
What if i break up
From the fiction
So soothing.
A dream,
A thought,
A life in your arms,
A life filled with
Our dreams
So far..
Why am i still so close?
But still afar,
To the world so close?
Why do i still think
About you?
Is it my love
Or the affection so close?
What is it?
What the world can't appease!
I still dream,
That is the problem
My world is small,
As you have seen it!
I still couldn't digest
A fact so near!
Are we really apart?
Or is this a dream
So full of tears?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 12 December 2013

A great poem, we can never forget the one we love.

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Payal Parande 12 December 2013

a well built piece... very nice

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Poetheart Morgan 12 December 2013

Dream poet always a good dream. That is the way the things happens. First in mind firmly and after day by day all things change straight to your dream. You world is not small is just you. An unique person in all this world! ! ! !

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Valsa George 13 December 2013

Dreams and reality are two different things! When dreams are shattered, there is pain! But in surfing over that pain, there is victory! ! Good write, Rahul! !

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Shreya Nair 11 May 2014

it's beautiful... depicts emotions well! !

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Bharti Chandwani 10 February 2014

writtin by heart..............Good work! ! ! keep writing.

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Shania K. Younce 26 December 2013

It is quite beautiful.

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Shreya Nair 15 December 2013

it's mesmerizing... good job!

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Maria Goodison 14 December 2013

Very good lots of emotion

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