A Day New One Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Day New One

Rating: 4.3


On each new day
We loose the way
When something is done deliberately wrong
It might prove very long

No time to assess what was right
Constant tussle and vigorous fight
Judgment full of errors and correction not slight
Life in dark and may not find light

It moves on aimlsslessly without any sight
No one has guts to make it right
How to prevail upon others and bring the peace?
When no one is pre-occupied and not at ease

Do we understand the value of our being?
Have we ever found the time to peacefully sing?
What keeps us away from natural environment?
Why do we leave ghastly scene amidst hostile movement?

If we think right and mend course in time
The day may become bright and free from crime
Each day we die for no benefit of humanity
It is not the message of divinity

Love the life and duration as well
Make it memorable for others to tell
Don’t shroud life under veil of secrecy?
Ask for blessings and simple mercy

Do we lead the life as it is claimed?
Is it unblemished and not to be blamed?
It goes on as if everything is fully set
We confine it to ourselves and not others to let

How to claim whole world as one family?
Does it not look absurd and completely silly?
Have we not traded it for our selfish end?
What nice feelings or messages we send?

We need to understand the human value
How many died or survived is not the issue?
How much world benefited from passing of our day?
Life may be over any time if given away the way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 23 July 2010

On each new day We loose the way.. we loose the track to correct it once again.....10

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Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

On each new day We loose the way When something is done deliberately wrong It might prove very long... each day is new day for us....10

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Antonio Liao 04 August 2010

A resurrected call of change...pushes for a while in our dreamy eyes... such clever poet of the century.....you got the best for our thought to see, more beyond than to live of what is today...thank you and God bless...a 10 +++

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Joseph Poewhit 01 August 2010

One can become weighted down by questions, living life and faith in GOD overcomes

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Kolawole Ajao 24 July 2010

More, more questions. That is life us. Questions then, questions now, questions ad infinitum. A nice poem. Continue.

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Chand Shikari 23 July 2010

On each new day We loose the way.. each day new day with challenges....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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