A Day In Dong Tam Poem by Michael Pruchnicki

A Day In Dong Tam

Rating: 1.6


Another hot day
he said
How hot
I said
Hot enough to fry eggs on asphalt
he said
No asphalt in sight
I said

About then the mortars started
and the rice paddy erupted
with blackclouds and falling dirt

Just another bleeding day in the Nam
he said
I got today and a wakeup
I said
Lucky bugger
he said

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 27 April 2010

I guess if you were still breathing you were doing real good. I can really feel the atmosphere and environs of the place and the conditions in this writing.

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