A Daughtr's Faith Poem by Areena Arora

A Daughtr's Faith

Rating: 5.0


Father prove day
is a special day
a way to a happy ray
Chance by chance our names were called
along the fathers we proudly walked
Her chance came and her name was called
through the audience alone she walked
On the stage,
she proudly explained
My dad is unlucky you can't see him at all
but lucky that he is seen whenever I give a call
He was a soldier in the wars
who lost his life for the sake of yours
leaving behind us alone
every step of our life is now a loan
which can not be fulfilled forever
hope the samis repeated never
He will return again
then a new life will begain
It's my faith
A daughter's faith

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jappane Human 13 February 2009

Hey this is the truth, i like the way you write poems, and the fact that you write about God just makes it more special!

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Harold K Schreiberg 05 September 2009

Very moving verses...Congratulations & thanks for these lines that convey so much emotion. May God be with you always, young lady!

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V P Mahur 02 March 2014

Dear Areena your word are heart touching you write with a sweet flow Thanks for such a lovely poem I invite you to read my poems and express your views.

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Binish Cd 08 January 2012

really touching words from an innocent mind....10+

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Saadat Tahir 10 June 2010

great touchy lines areena beautiful style...and a deep deep daughters love... done well there...may ur wish b granted.... mayb u'll like my poems 'daughters...' & 'winning smile..' cheers

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 January 2010

why did you make me rate this one 10! this should have more than 10! hahaha... nice write!

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Prashant Shaurya 01 December 2009

great poem Areena.. really well penned.. well hats off to our BRAVEHEARTS.. LOVE prashant

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Areena Arora

Areena Arora

Lucknow, presently in Allahabd, India
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