A Darted Dot Poem by Neela Nath Das

A Darted Dot

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Shutting down the windows
of mystic mind to stay in
closed intangible blue-chamber,
can serenity be stolen by sin?
Here the winding wild ways
maiden-desires truly touch.
The top of the Oak and Pine
are blocked by blinders such
as boulders and chips of rocks,
in between forest flowers shine...
But, the dark ditch yearns to swallow,
the bliss and for past sadness pines.
Mountain and the wildest seas
both are linked with a thread,
if one goes up with heaps of earth,
another will wield the lower spread!
A darted dot at dawn dives deep in dream.
The whims of a whirling air
convey the heart-piercing scream- - - - - - -
Listen, no island can be
cared without sea.
Hypnotic shingles I find always,
on your shore, o sea, with me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bursting with a beauty that is refreshing!

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R.j. Wynn 17 June 2013

maybe your best ever.

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Unwritten Soul 18 April 2013

Mesmerizing! the end just like an evening breeze from the sea_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 15 April 2013

heart-piercing scream... I like it. thanks. I find always on your shore of poetic ocean.

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