Neela Nath


A Darted Dot - Poem by Neela Nath

Shutting down the windows
of mystic mind to stay in
closed intangible blue-chamber,
can serenity be stolen by sin?
Here the winding wild ways
maiden-desires truly touch.
The top of the Oak and Pine
are blocked by blinders such
as boulders and chips of rocks,
in between forest flowers shine...
But, the dark ditch yearns to swallow,
the bliss and for past sadness pines.
Mountain and the wildest seas
both are linked with a thread,
if one goes up with heaps of earth,
another will wield the lower spread!
A darted dot at dawn dives deep in dream.
The whims of a whirling air
convey the heart-piercing scream- - - - - - -
Listen, no island can be
cared without sea.
Hypnotic shingles I find always,
on your shore, o sea, with me!


Comments about A Darted Dot by Neela Nath

  • Silver Star - 4,281 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/11/2014 10:09:00 PM)

    Bursting with a beauty that is refreshing! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/17/2013 10:05:00 PM)

    maybe your best ever. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (4/18/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    Mesmerizing! the end just like an evening breeze from the sea_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/15/2013 3:58:00 AM)

    heart-piercing scream... I like it. thanks.
    I find always on your shore of poetic ocean. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 19, 2013


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