! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Cruel Joke... Senryu Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Cruel Joke... Senryu

Rating: 2.5


Nursing a fracture
On bed, leg stretched out in cast;
Friends smile and sign...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ch J Satyananda Kumar 17 June 2009

Very good madam.....................

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VERY TRUE MAM IN BOARDING SCHOOLS...HAND OR LEG...FRACTURES FETCHES THESE AUTOGRAPHS..THERE IS NO PAIN SO IT IS NOT CRUEL.. A PERFECT SENRYU...PLEASE READ MY SENRYU'S TOO

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Raj Nandy 19 June 2009

Oh God Mamta ji, not again! Sincerely hope this is that old one, from my side a ten! -Raj Nandy

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Sandra Fowler 18 June 2009

I am so sorry, Mamta. Even warmth and friendship can be hard to bear when life has become so inconvenient. Thank you for sharing your feelings. I completely sympathize. Love, SandraX

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Saadat Tahir 17 June 2009

touched a nerve there during rounds...i used to see the anguish on the faces as people would laugh and joke...write funny things and then scamble to get out for a slam dunk...which was ruefully watcched by a young heart very well written cheers

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Priyanka Bhowmick 17 June 2009

awwh i was wishing to hav dis kind of fracture whre friends wud come n giv their autografs :) .. lovely senryu! !

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premji premji 17 June 2009

art is cruel................

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