A Cruel Attitude Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

A Cruel Attitude

Rating: 2.4


I don't want to say anything
You have left me for nothing
You have filled my life with sorrow
I don't know what will happen tomorrow
Your indifference will take my life
I myself have put my throat on the knife
Everything was going on very well
No sooner did I stand than I fell
Now you have made a fun of me
And you are walking with glee
What will happen to my emotion?
Where you have made a commotion
I think I was absolutely wrong
My ruin has sounded a furious gong
My sentiments are extremely genuine
O, God please save me from this ruin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louise Hernan 29 November 2011

Hi Mohammad - This is sad and so heartfelt - the emotion sure does come thru clearly. Excellent! ! :)

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Jenny Gordon 21 April 2011

Ah, so poignantly expressed! This is almost wrenching. So perfectly touching and moving, seemingly simplistic, yet excellently expressive of the cruel situation and ensuing deadly grief. Beautiful and very well done. Indeed, with the Lord belongs mercy, and His mercy endures for ever.

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Ken E Hall 21 April 2011

Everyone needs love and when things go wrong...words alone also need action...thoughtful write on a page of life...regards

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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