* A Critics Chisel And Hammer Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan
* A Critics Chisel And Hammer
to all Poemhunter's critics circle
More welcome notes
to the thrilling replies
As you criticized my
poems true and defined
Relate more my sorrows and pain
as well as breath
my joy happiness wing
Creative response I read
artists morale up lift
inspires circle critics
Let your impartial pen
undyingly share
word rhymes
besets streams like
prose in metamorphical pin
Like you striking critics
chasing crystallized air
reclining in marbled corner
I am your chisel
You are my hammer
Wonderful really...a different poem on an uncommon subject good 10
Lovely and beautiful piece..........nice metaphors used...Thanks! ! !
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4/25/2024 8:51:38 AM # 1.0.0.1119
chisel does what hammer wants it to do...we write what we think and feel....a piece wholesome for everybody to read...you got it! ! ! ! !