A Crimson Sky Poem by M Rene Riel

A Crimson Sky

Rating: 3.3


might i make mention,
of a looming crimson sky
this moment now fleeting
and will quickly pass you by
in the light crimson lines
memories are there
it can quickly put you back
into the crimson I stare,
my days of youth gone
but, a memory doesn't age,
my thoughts of you linger
on a crimson stage,
these moments come and go
I want them all to last
my memories of you
are locked in a crimson past
might I make mention
about what you just read
the crimson is fleeting
but, the memories are in my head.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 22 July 2008

a good poem, nicely done

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Tanya Stanford 27 August 2008

Lovely flowing poem. Expecially love mention of 'a memory doesn't age' never actually thought of that. Lovely composition. Enjoyed it.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

A nice poem. Beautiful composition.

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Emily Oldham 20 September 2008

Brilliant flow of thought. i also like the phrase you used, 'love doesn't age'. amazing quote. thanks Athena

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Angelic Warrior 30 August 2009

the meaning could seem quite simple at first glance....but you can almost feel the hidden meanings which are as vivid and complex as crimson......excellent write! truly eye catching :)

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Indira Renganathan 08 August 2009

The usage of the word crimson is wonderful, exciting...a poem of good metaphor...thanks

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Sandra Fowler 15 July 2009

Very vivid use of metaphor. Love lives on in memory. 10 for a fine word painting. As always, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Lovely poem 10++

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Vinod Kumar 01 January 2009

Memmories are in the Heart, may be sweet or sour, that ever young, a sensitive poem, Thank you author,2009 best whshes to you and family.

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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