A Convicts Life Poem by exotic lokz

A Convicts Life

Rating: 5.0


were all locked up for messing up
were all the same
we share the same pain
we wear orange, they wear
puprle an they wear yellow
sothey wear tan
but it doesnt matter cuz their all the second hand
our school is fenced in just like a pigs pin
they tell us when to sleep
an when to wake
when to shower they have all the power
they even tell us when to eat
some times i think they feed us dog meat
they heard us arounf, where always bein loked down on for our lifes
pepole come in with suites an ties looking at us as if we are a EXOTIC displaywe sleep in a 4x4 cell but i call it a cage we are all treated the same, animals that have gone insane, but what they dnt know is how all the pain makes us live our life without a scence of shame you cant tell us apart except for our shirts but at the end of our time we all go back living our lives in pain theirs no point in doing right if we always have to be fighting for our rights

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 July 2011

It was a wonderful poem composed with great skill. Fine imagery. Congratulations! Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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Craig Anderson 19 July 2011

Exotic. Listen you commit the crime bla blah you know how the rest goes. But you haven't got to lower your standard. YOUR STANDARD get yourself clued up to what you want to achieve when you come out. Don't look around you now, think what your going to look like when you come out. But don't dropp your standards. Yes sir No Sir costs nothing..it's called manners. As long as it's a two way street and you get it back like for like. People will treat you different, in there trust me get your plan worked out what your going to do when you leave there. People will be saying Hmm Exotic he changed there's something about him, they'll be wanna like you trust me. lol I told you I'd dog you. Peace and Best Regards Craig.

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