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A (Conventional) Love Song!

Oh my Love! The throb and thrill of my life!
Why remain so elusive like will-o’- the- wisp?
Why vanish quickly like a delightful dream
Why fade out like a symphony sweet?

Won’t you come to me to ease my pain
To herald for me a new dawn
To transport me to worlds intangible
To be ever with me as my guardian angel

Hold my hand when I am about to fall
Help me set new goals when I am lost
Make me laugh when I am low
Infuse courage when I develop cold feet

Show me dew drops that I can see diamonds
Feed me with home fare that I may taste Ambrosia
Gift me a rose that a thousand blooms instantly burst open
Talk high of me that rainbows may arch around my sky

Take your glance off, I will wither like a flower
Show a cold shoulder, I am sure to grow frozen inside
Speak roughly, I would hear rumblings of thunder in my ear
Turn your back, Oh! My heart would break into shards

Like the setting sun nose diving into the depths,
Like two streams that flow and merge as one
And travel miles to run down to the sea,
Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever!

Submitted: Sunday, June 09, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 10, 2013


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  • Paul Sebastian (4/17/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    Song of love from a lover awaiting for her loved one to unite. Beautiful! ! ! Feelings well captured in words. Great romantic write.

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  • Yash Shinde (3/19/2014 12:09:00 AM)

    what a romantic song dear, .....it would be a hit if it is fused with rhythm and music.......great..

  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (3/3/2014 10:23:00 AM)

    An eternal love song composed very delicately.........Valsa..........

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/14/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Beautiful romantic poem.. Loved reading it twice. And the last stanza so beautifully completed...

  • Heather Wilkins (6/26/2013 5:31:00 PM)

    Sing a beautiful love song.

  • Sekharan Pookkat (6/18/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    Sing and sing the song of love
    And fill the hearts of all

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (6/15/2013 3:05:00 AM)

    Oh! What a lovely romantic love song! If only all pairs were like this oozing with love there wouldn't be any divorce in the world. Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever is a brilliant finishing line, Valsa! KUDOS!

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (6/15/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    What a romantic poem, Valsa! Oh! what a thrill to read your wonderful poem oozing with love! If only every pair in the world is such there won't be any divorces as the pair plunges into eternity to be in love ever and ever!
    AN AWESOME WRITE!

  • Diane Hine (6/14/2013 8:10:00 AM)

    A grand love poem, bursting with passion!

  • Neela Nath (6/13/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    So romantic it is.Lovable.

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