Treasure Island

Valsa George


A (Conventional) Love Song!


Oh my Love! The throb and thrill of my life!
Why remain so elusive like will-o’- the- wisp?
Why vanish quickly like a delightful dream
Why fade out like a symphony sweet?

Won’t you come to me to ease my pain
To herald for me a new dawn
To transport me to worlds intangible
To be ever with me as my guardian angel

Hold my hand when I am about to fall
Help me set new goals when I am lost
Make me laugh when I am low
Infuse courage when I develop cold feet

Show me dew drops that I can see diamonds
Feed me with home fare that I may taste Ambrosia
Gift me a rose that a thousand blooms instantly burst open
Talk high of me that rainbows may arch around my sky

Take your glance off, I will wither like a flower
Show a cold shoulder, I am sure to grow frozen inside
Speak roughly, I would hear rumblings of thunder in my ear
Turn your back, Oh! My heart would break into shards

Like the setting sun nose diving into the depths,
Like two streams that flow and merge as one
And travel miles to run down to the sea,
Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever!

Submitted: Sunday, June 09, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 10, 2013

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  • Amitava Sur (6/3/2014 10:36:00 PM)

    A amazing write up specially plunging into eternity with the immortal love.... I was just floating with your flow of words. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (5/30/2014 11:15:00 AM)

    Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever!
    Love is God and God is love, the poem is a sweet lovely song for him. (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (4/28/2014 8:13:00 PM)

    .......oh this is truly beautiful and your words would definitely win anyone's heart....enjoyed this beautiful poem... (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian (4/17/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    Song of love from a lover awaiting for her loved one to unite. Beautiful! ! ! Feelings well captured in words. Great romantic write. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (3/19/2014 12:09:00 AM)

    what a romantic song dear, .....it would be a hit if it is fused with rhythm and music.......great.. (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (6/15/2013 3:05:00 AM)

    Oh! What a lovely romantic love song! If only all pairs were like this oozing with love there wouldn't be any divorce in the world. Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever is a brilliant finishing line, Valsa! KUDOS! (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (6/15/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    What a romantic poem, Valsa! Oh! what a thrill to read your wonderful poem oozing with love! If only every pair in the world is such there won't be any divorces as the pair plunges into eternity to be in love ever and ever!
    AN AWESOME WRITE! (Report) Reply

  • Payal Parande (6/12/2013 3:08:00 PM)

    Love begins at home, and it is not how much we do... but how much love we put in that action.
    Mother Teresa
    oh ma'am! i am in love with this piece...bravo indeed (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (6/11/2013 5:13:00 AM)

    its so romantically written.love will never be ended.love can melt evey iciness heart and make lots of droplets which wet every dried heart.
    wonderful i love it~nb10+++ (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (6/10/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    Love is a many splendid thing that is never still and true love is like a rare berautiful orchid. (Report) Reply

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