A Concept Of Independence Poem by Ramesh T A

A Concept Of Independence

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Independence of individuals talks about freedom of a nation;
Only individuals’ independence assures freedom of democracy.
What a free individual thinks and feels, does as he wishes;
If a girl can go anywhere at night wearing full jewels, there
Only can one see a nation is really free, says Mahatma Gandhi!

But “man is born free, yet he is in chains everywhere, ” says Rousseau!
Confined in circles of creed, colour and class many are collapsed!
Democracy can live in unity in diversity, coexistence and nonviolence;
This only can uphold independence of individuals and world nations!
Where can we see such democracy with independence to individuals?

Individuals have no place now with the mixing of isms in democracy!
There is no point in celebrating independence as it is just a ceremony.
To achieve independence knowledge, vision and ambition are needed
To implement ideas of talent in action to make achievements to stand!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 13 August 2009

Thanks Ramabrahman and Jack Tex for your observations!

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 13 August 2009

A very good concept about independence. liked it.

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Jack Tex 13 August 2009

Solid effort, it's a good one. It's funny you should mention such concept for it's been on my mind for quite some time now. For what it's worth, independence begins from individuals, then it will boom to a whole nation, it's called mushroom growth. On that note, I want to wish you well with your life and your write. Thanks for sharin.

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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