Edwina Reizer

Rookie - 42 Points (12/22/1937 / LAKEWOOD, NJ)

A Compromise - Poem by Edwina Reizer

I looked towards the sun one fine day
and felt it shine on my face.
The heat of it penetrated deeply
but it soon fell out of place.
A large cloud covered her
and my face lost the glow.
I stayed waiting for the cloud to move.
I watched from way below.

And in the waiting time I thought
'the sun is waiting too.'
And the cloud must have read our minds
because the sun came shining through.
Now if the cloud can read minds
she knows I don't like shade.
She'll find another path to take
and a compromise will be made.


Comments about A Compromise by Edwina Reizer

  • Rookie - 139 Points John Brown (12/10/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    A magical poem Edwina. I enjoyed it very much. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,238 Points Tiku . (9/9/2013 12:33:00 PM)

    beautiful poem.The flow, wordplay and rhyme is so nice.keep inking Edwina. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013


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