Captain Cur

Rookie - 415 Points (England)

A Composition Of Rare Feminine Art, Piano Rose - Poem by Captain Cur

You are a red velvet rose, 

lying on white ivory keys, 

surrounded by black polished wood
and each notes musical breeze. 



You have warm tender eyes 

with the life of a smile
and smooth satin limbs
moving 
in a classic elegant style. 



You are soft to the touch; 

yet, your resilient petals are strong, 

a composition of rare feminine Art, 

an allegro introducing a song. 



You are a beautiful chord, 

a sound enticingly new, 

my heart in silence sings to you 

sweet rose covered with dew. 



Comments about A Composition Of Rare Feminine Art, Piano Rose by Captain Cur

  • Veteran Poet - 1,358 Points Unwritten Soul (5/4/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    I agree with Diane, it is an elegant work..it just lovely_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,904 Points Mr. Nobody (4/20/2014 11:59:00 AM)

    From the Crow's nest you sing!
    From deep withing the Galley below,
    I clearly hear you ring! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (5/29/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    An elegant metaphor. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013


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