## A Competitive World -Senryu Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

## A Competitive World -Senryu

Rating: 3.1


competitive world
we have made it to be one
man never wins god (death)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 08 June 2009

An interesting observation Samanyan

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 June 2009

Outstanding work

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Ency Bearis 09 June 2009

a significant theme....

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Carol Gall 09 June 2009

MOST EXCELLENT......

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Priyanka Bhowmick 10 June 2009

the most bitter reality.. man can never win over death.. excellent piece..10 up.

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this si the stuff.. i like this

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Rajaram Ramachandran 09 June 2009

Before the death, the leveller, scepter and crown must tumble down.

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Louis Rams 09 June 2009

words of truth are written here

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Catrina Heart 09 June 2009

competitive haiku posted...Great!

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