A Committed Man In This Lagoon. Poem by Thampi KEE

A Committed Man In This Lagoon.

Rating: 4.4


I could never imagine
And ever fall in love
And know our love
And I could ever like parting of my nation and race…..
I’ll be here ultimately for everything.
I’ll be here, to share their love and fun.
I’ll love their posture and pride
And I could never imagine a parting of this race
And this side of our great nation
And this side of our loving race
I’ll be let my heart to feel free to forget
I’ll be mad our love to each other
I’ll be need a lover - a devil
Share my bliss, share my life
I promise I will be for whom
Share my fun share my life

You said a communist
You said a committed man
Is all we committed?
Committed really embrace you!
I could never imagine
And ever fall in this love…
And know our love in this committed race,
I` ll love your posture and pride
Litany you made, a queer to me….
I` ll mad the prude thy made
The Cute smell of your words…

I wish to add..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anne Jojo 06 November 2006

yeah Kee. thats just how humans are. well crafted, really.

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Raghavan Warrier 24 November 2006

We are not divine. Very true

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unknown Viper 27 December 2007

a great thought...well done

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Subbaraman N V 01 July 2008

We are we are.......................!

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 07 October 2008

ur words raced thru a very unconventional idea...

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Rahul Sharma 23 February 2014

Somewhere, I did find my own style of writing... : -)

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Valsa George 05 June 2013

Beautifully written! Why don't you write more of this stuff? Sorry I missed this poem earlier! !

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Neela Nath Das 03 November 2012

Stupendous.Love to race and culture has added a different odor to it.

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Pankajam K 23 March 2012

Deep thoughts well presented. Nice read.

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Lenore Lee 20 October 2011

It is amazing that you can be so very deep. I adore this poem and your writing. Keep believing, my friend.

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