A Collision Of Souls Poem by Mary Nagy

A Collision Of Souls



When she first saw him walking like a God down to the lake
she knew it was the last free breath that she would ever take.

Right then and there she knew it, her world forever changed.
Her life took on new meaning as if all was prearranged.

She knew she had to meet him, this guy moved in next door.
So she slipped on her bikini and went strolling by the shore.

She paid him no attention, just made sure that he would see
the woman he would surely love from then till eternity.


When he first saw her walking down the beach without a care
he didn't have the nerve to speak, just gave an open stare.

He knew right then he loved her though he didn't know her name.
From that day on he knew his life would never be the same.

He tried to get attention yet you'd think she didn't see
the feelings that he couldn't hide had nearly made him flee.

He knew he had to meet her, this young girl in the sun.
He made his move and from then on their worlds had become one.


When their eyes met they melted almost beyond control.
The world began to tremble with this collision of the souls.

Many watched the fireworks that day out by the lake.
The water was the backdropp for the love they'd surely make.

Their love was overpowering, yet ever gently so.
It made each think that they must never let the other go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Faith Elizabeth Brigham 24 September 2005

Mary-You have written a great poem here that kept me engrossed up to the last word. I am looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work. All my best-Faith Elizabeth Brigham

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Mark Wallenbrock 26 September 2005

Great Poem you should be very proud Thank You for the experience F'nor

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Victoria Hughes 26 September 2005

another lovely poem Mary, well done V x

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Shelia Williams 27 September 2005

Very nicely written. Great job.

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Don Stratford 30 September 2005

Mary This stands to the love that does occur between man and woman and the romance that we all strive for. Well done Don S

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Roseann Shawiak 16 October 2013

Fantastic poem about timid love becoming even more. Title is great too! RoseAnn

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Melvina Germain 11 January 2007

Fabulous, the emotion is just oozing out, I truly loved reading this poem. Thankyou for the experience.---Melvina---

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Duncan Wyllie 05 March 2006

Applaud! Applaud! Lady of the lake, sword pulled from stone freeing the passion.Beautiful Mary, Really.Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 14 February 2006

Wonderful, I could feel the emotion you placed.Loved it! Regards Patricia

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Silver Akira 05 February 2006

Wow your poem was amazing, it was awesome how you captured the emotions perfectly.

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