A Cold White Light Poem by hap rochelle

A Cold White Light

Rating: 2.0


he loved the
cold white light of the fog
flowing around his legs
wispy and ephemeral
yet hard and impenetrable
wrapping him in its tendril arms
hiding him from the world

Wednesday, October 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Staley 08 October 2014

nice drastical language and dramatic imagery. An enjoyable read...although it kinda seems like it should be a part of a bigger work of writing that would show the meaning of this piece and be used for a purpose.

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