Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,112 Points (25 July 1956)

A Clipped Rondeau - Poem by Diane Hine

My glitch, though usually discreet
is liable to squeal or tweet.
Part elephant, part plumed mahout
it’s hook-armed with a waterspout
and twitchy as a parakeet.

It’s mostly well-behaved and neat
and friends pretend they cannot see it
but Mummy loves to talk about
my glitch.

I hide it in a draped white sheet
like art by M. Rene Magritte
but sometimes it escapes to flout
the rules or insolently pout
and then I wish I could delete
my glitch.

Comments about A Clipped Rondeau by Diane Hine

  • Veteran Poet - 1,584 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/8/2014 10:59:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem! Very powerful (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (2/16/2014 6:31:00 AM)

    As a poet who is on a monthly hegira to her own intimate worlds that might be more pleasant that these forums, Diane, you are surprisingly a different person entitled to have your clipped Rondeau in and around and far and wide..... Your resurfacing in the PH is good.
    I was just wondering whether it is Rondeau or Rendezvous, Diane Hine.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,665 Points Valsa George (2/13/2014 10:41:00 PM)

    Is it because of a glitch, that you kept away from PH for a while...? I can't believe, Diana. For a while I missed your enigmatic writings! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (2/13/2014 10:11:00 AM)

    I'm curious to know what your glitch is Diane - definitely not your poetry. Very clever write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 13, 2014

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