A Childhood Game Poem by Heather Burns

A Childhood Game

Rating: 4.5


While playing a childhood game
these knees took the fall

With proper medication
they began to carry the ball

If another game begins
they will not take the fall

If not number one
there will be no game at all.

Monday, October 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Md Asadullah 24 October 2014

Last line of the poem shows your determination to be always number one, thanks for the share 10/10

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Ramesh Rai 21 October 2014

Game is always to win. Lovely write. Regards

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 21 October 2014

A beautiful poem with simple images and liked it..

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