Treasure Island

ramesh rai

(13.12.1955 / howrah)

A Cascading Journey


My thoughts are falling
on my stone heart, leaving a deep cavity
on my heart, like the waterfall
falling from high mountain
piercing rock of many layer
swipe all element with flow of cascade
making a stream of eagerness
to meet and submerge with a river
asking to come on her way
to meet the greater ocean, from where
my thoughts will evaporate and
reach the sky, and to drizzle with
mild water, to irrigate creation
to quench thirst of creature.

Submitted: Sunday, February 23, 2014
Edited: Monday, February 24, 2014

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  • Roseann Shawiak (3/23/2014 10:46:00 PM)

    Great imagery and thoughtful quenching of creative knowledge in this poem.
    Really enjoyed it's rhythm and flow like the cascading waterfall of your mind.
    Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (2/26/2014 1:00:00 PM)

    A thoughtful write. Beautiful lines....
    my thoughts will evaporate and
    reach the sky, and to drizzle with
    mild water, to irrigate creation
    to quench thirst of creature. Beautiful cascading journey one followed by another to serve the purpose of journey.
    Loved reading this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi (2/23/2014 12:33:00 PM)

    Lovely! Beautiful! Whilst reading it, I could smell an energetic cascade, all set for the journey toward a higher beginning to the next stop. Learning and improving :) (Report) Reply

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