A Carefree Life Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

A Carefree Life

Rating: 3.5


A carefree life
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Between the cradle;
And the grave
For the meanings of life
And for little space
He struggles and craves
Always happy with sunset
While looking in earnest
That life has brought
him to such a pass
With pessimism
He disowns regret
No end to him, living serves
Live or cease to live
Carries no significance
And death without consequence
Now he is free with sense
Thanking God,
Him, no more he believes
Absolved of final responsibility
He thinks he is almighty
If life is meaningless
The world be robbed of its cruelty
Failure and success means nothing
For from chaos of life
He has seized the secret of living
And now happy leaping and singing
To carefree life he clings
And says, oh life
Where is your sting……………..

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem on carefree life when one chooses....to be more relaxed than
being serious.........
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 27 June 2014

Beautiful poem filled with positivity...Loved lines... Between the cradle; And the grave For the meanings of life And for little space He struggles and craves....Loved reading each lines. Beautifully you have presented it.

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Full of feelings and pregnant with a passion that teaches how to live life with out fear. Well done my friend!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 January 2014

Very touching.........excellent one and nicely composed! ......10 Tanmay kumar sankhua

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 January 2014

Many many thanks, my dear poet Mohammad Akmal Nazir........please read my other poems at your leisure time

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 January 2014

Very poignant write indeed! A sure...........10.

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