A Cage! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar
A Cage!
I am captivated inside a cage.
It's a cage of darkness.
It's like a black cloud covering all over me.
Its so dark, I cannot see myself.
I don't know where I am lost.
I was never like this before.
I couldn't realize,
Why this happened?
How this happened?
Its so gloomy inside.
There is no one who could see me.
Nor I can see anyone.
Who will free me from this cage?
I wondered did I captivate myself,
or anyone trapped me inside this cage?
If I remain on this cage for long,
No one will ask for me!
Even if I die on this cage also,
Beloved ones will offer condolences and
of course they will always remember me.
World will move on like before.
My presence or absence,
Doesn't make any difference.
Because its law of nature.
Even they have to survive
So they cannot just sit aside.
Life keeps on offering challenges.
Which will never allow us to sit in one place even for few seconds.
It will make us run without a break.
Our Beloved ones have died but we are also moving with the world!
This is the fact of life, which no one can change.
Life is only one!
We have to accept everything as it is!
We cannot swim against tides, but can go on with the flow!
This is the Teachings of life!
Is it......Our Life or our Thoughts inside a Cage?
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© 2014.
Geetha Jayakumar.
If every one realises this truth of life, he can be in peace and bliss. A good write. Man is born free but ever in chains!
Its so dark, I cannot see myself. As such also you will not be able to see yourself without mirror. I guess your poem will work without that line also If I remain IN this cage for long, Even if I die IN this cage also, Somewhere your poem takes a detour from the cage to some other place altogether which you try to tag it at end.... Not sure if you want that break... Liked the poem though
Human life is like that only - full of stumbling blocks and chains Even if you like to come out of it - you'll be dragged and pulled in....... very right Geetha
A reality check, life is what you make it...yes that cage is there...only sometimes someone else has the key...thought provoking poem indeed.great, regards
It is a beautiful poem on life and pain having stunning expression and nice collocation. Enjoyed reading it. I like the most line is... We cannot swim against tides, but can go on with the flow! Thank u dear madam for posting such a gem.
Beautifully written poem..Geetha ji.....Life is well explained in this. Thanks for sharing.
Well done geetha. And it is so very true. Great observation about life!
Nic poem....10 Smile is for deception too In relation When you want to cheat dear ones And still claim the near ones
Toooooooooo good mam. Feeling same...FELT IT MAM...BEAUTIFUL. KEEP WRITING MAM. Your an inspiration for women like me. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 5:12:59 PM # 1.0.0.1119
a good write inside a cage enjoyed