A Burden On Individual Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Burden On Individual

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It is great burden on individual if he tries to conceal
His conscience may bite till he doesn’t reveal
It is like mustering medicine on wounds to heal
He may have peace of mind and fee it in real

It is human tendency to feel pinch of salt
He may think all the time about his fault
He may not be in position to hide his guilt
It is human mechanism that is there and inbuilt

One must remain particular about doing small things
His strength lies in feeling great like kings
He may find it convinient o think of powerful desire
His followers may follow suit and always admire

One may feel unwanted and forgotten by everybody
He may have strong urge for hunger in body
H e may feel the impact of poverty despite being rich
Everything may seems to be slipping away beyond his reach

He may feel elated at every success
With God’s blessings he will always have an easy access
It required only humbleness with an earnest try
He should leave it to almighty and never question why?

One should never feel lonely and isolated
Everything should run smoothly and stay related
It may not be possible to keep everything in tact
Less you retain more will be happiness in fact

It becomes impregnable fort if that is fortified
Nothing can penetrate even if honestly tried
We should not create a wall where nothing can go out
It will be then impossible to retrieve from possible rout

Let there be all the doors open for free air to come in
You may have to make less effort to score the win
You may easily converse and have the idea as to how to cope
It may prove not difficult but easy to walk on rope

Feed the one person if you can’t cater many
Try to show you are rich even if you are without penny
The flow will be automatic and the purpose will be served
You may get all what you have longed for and deserved


Spread out message of love and harmony to all
You may still feel guilty conscience to make call
Don’t confine anything to your self but make concerted effort
See to it that you are not failing in making good rapport

Everything will be fine with the advent of self confidence
Your heart may not skip with any of the bad incidence
It may prove to be a great asset on your part
It will good beginning with happy start

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 13 May 2010

the last line is convincing..i like it...nicely done. lengthy but nice...

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Gul naz 26 May 2010

Everything will be fine with the advent of self confidence Your heart may not skip with any of the bad incidence It may prove to be a great asset on your part It will good beginning with happy start Nice reading it thank for sharing it :)

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Good diction…educative…wise… ‘…One must remain particular about doing small things…’ Yeah doing small things is dip-stick-test’ for a doer…e.g. one may spend million INR in weeding of daughter…but when giving a few bucks to a beggar his face flutter …I’ve watched it …and you’ve caught it… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Yoni Assis 20 May 2010

I agree with the others...a bit lengthy, but the message is clear.

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Nicanor P. Tiosen 20 May 2010

Your ideas are profound and your poem well-crafted. I know I'll learn a lot from you. Thanks for sharing.

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Ravi Sathasivam 18 May 2010

Lengthy poem but well written I enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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