A Broken Soul Poem by Ben mcelfresh

A Broken Soul



a broken soul sits among us
a broken soul we'll never know who

it could be me, it could be you
the quiet one always sits in the corner

the active one is outside playing
but you never know who has the broken soul

a broken heart
a broken soul

can be the same, yet so far apart
we will never know who owns the broken soul

maybe it's the musician who plays the love song
maybe it's the writer who has every friend

but who owns the broken soul shall never tell
the broken soul travels around never to be seen

never to be heard and never to be known
maybe the homeless man who lives in the box

maybe it's the football player who everyone loves
but who owns this broken soul no one shall ever know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 18 September 2009

Nice truthful poem..10

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Anabel just Anabel 07 March 2007

who could it be? still no answer till that soul lets us see it! ! nice poem! !

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jennifer hall 20 February 2007

thats sooo true cause we never know who is who.....great poem

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Allenika ... 16 February 2007

That is true. we never know who has the broken soul. just like you said: could be the quite one or the active. good one i like it.

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Tahnee ? ? ? 11 December 2006

interesting poem. i enjoyed it.

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