A Broken Mirror Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Broken Mirror

Rating: 4.5


Our love was destined to fail,
I tried to save it without avail,
For between us, you built a fence,
Leaving me weak without any defense...

You turned my heart into a fortress
Inhabited by a soul sad and hopeless
But time has done the healing,
Making me self-confident with new feelings...

In the Mighty One above,
I found fortitude, peace and love...
I got the courage to bury my past
And forgetting a love I failed to cast...

Clearly, you became a loser and sinner
While I became stronger and a winner...
Now, I stand on a solid ground,
Hoping for a real love to be found...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lenore Lee 12 February 2012

Wonderful poem with a wonderful rhyming scheme. Just like all your other poems it is miserable but ends up hopeful at the end, I adore it. Keep spirits up Romeo!

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Bella Hernandez 13 February 2012

what a glorious poem to make people hope for a better day and love :) so glad that i finally read this superb poem... i really needed it :) One day Father will come and do the same thing he did for but for me peace and love Romeo ~Bella

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Kalpak Kaplash 15 February 2012

Wow! ! What a fantastic write....an emotional love poem which shows the defeat in love is not the end of world but you have to come out stronger as someone somewhere awaits you....

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Rekha Mandagere 16 February 2012

There is a fine unity of thought, skill and attitude surrounding life. I love the optimism and problem solving approach reflected in the poem. Marks 10

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Hans Vr 19 February 2012

This poem is really a fantastic work of art. The faith in the One above is heling us really through all difficulties. I like very much the verses where you become stronger and the winner and the other one the loser. Very well written.10+

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Amitava Sur 01 February 2014

A lovely poem with with emotions & heart break but with a message that true love makes a person more and more strong... loved it

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Heather Wilkins 12 October 2012

Now, I stand on a solid ground, hoping for a real love to be found. Looing toward the future.

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Guy Lip-more 26 August 2012

Powerful, thoughtful writing, great write.

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David Gerardino 12 May 2012

i can see your words , your poem made me think of my first date, , , , , it did not go well...10

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Marlene Rashidi 02 May 2012

I must say, this masterpiece left me speechless. So beautiful, and out of mind thinking.

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