A Broken Heart Poem by Blessing Anastasia Abaka

A Broken Heart

Rating: 4.5


A cheerful heart, what happen to it?
Does it break like a glass or does it cut off like a tree,
Does it smell like a rotten egg or does it fall like the snow.

A broken heart it is!
Does it sink like the droplet of the rain,
Does a broken heart Explode?

Why isn't a cheerful heart be appreciated?
Why is there condemnation instead of praise
The humiliation and condemnation make me want to crey.

Why does everyone please themselves before others,
Why do they insult those who are cheerful.
To me they are wicked and selfish
They have eaten up their emotion of love.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
TO THE VICTIMS OF HEART BROKE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 December 2012

the imagery is beautiful.. induldge and heart glee... the line They have eaten up their emotion of love... very poetic..

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Suzaku Vaneko 06 December 2012

Wow! You're an amazing poet. This poem is beautiful, I love it!

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Babatunde Aremu 06 December 2012

They have eaten up their emotion indeed. Great imagery and good poem. Keep writing.

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Asif Andalib 07 December 2012

Lovely write. I liked it

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Hazel Durham 07 December 2012

A very interesting poem about a broken heart and asking the question why some people resent a cheerful heart. Great write!

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

Why does everyone please themselves before others, Why do they insult those who are cheerful. To me they are wicked and selfish They have eaten up their emotion of love. love, hatred, jealousy, egoism, selfishness. all these points come in this poem and is expressed. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Matthias Pantaleon 12 October 2015

Heartfelt piece. Lucidly told.... But I was thinking maybe you should check line 3 of stanza 3. Do u mean CRY or CREY? ...beautiful poem.

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Bob Brown 30 December 2012

Splendid imagery.., . I loved this.

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Onyeme John 20 December 2012

Glassy Hearts... broken by stony hearts. Hearts that do not know the delicacy of human emotion. We hope the glassy hearts do not fall in the web of stony hearts, innocently. Nice poem Ana

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 December 2012

beautiful imagery... about broken heart..ilke the line They have eaten up their emotion of love very poeic.

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