Audrey Heller

Rookie - 0 Points (2/28/32 / Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida)

A Broken Heart - Poem by Audrey Heller

How do you mend, a broken
heart? Where do you begin
and where do you start? How
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Comments about A Broken Heart by Audrey Heller

  • Gold Star - 23,020 Points Kim Barney (12/11/2014 8:36:00 PM)

    Congratulations on having this poem chosen as poem of the day on December 11 for three years in a row now! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 261 Points Valentin Savin (12/11/2014 9:40:00 AM)

    A very interesting and touching poem. I liked it. Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 261 Points Valentin Savin (12/11/2014 9:38:00 AM)

    A very interesting and touching poem. I liked it. Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (12/11/2014 9:00:00 AM)

    nice poem - a broken heart - thanks to share and congrats (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,308 Points Patricia Grantham (12/11/2014 7:11:00 AM)

    A broken heart needs some time to heal. It can
    not happen all in a day, month or even a year.
    Love will come again! Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,364 Points Luis Estable (12/11/2014 4:01:00 AM)

    There are many sayings in this poem that have been overused in poetry. Nothing much new here, but the words tell a powerful story.

    Try to be a bit more original when you write this kind of poetry so it does not sound trite of overused..

    Keep on writing and thanks for this one!

    Luis Estable (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,778 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (12/11/2014 3:08:00 AM)

    Good poem...when one door closes another opens... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dwight Osawabine (12/11/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    this poem really brought my hopes up, I love it, if you don't mind can I use this for my english assignment? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/11/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem filled with positivity. True said broken heart takes a time to mend, but if one tries a new door is sure to open. Loved reading it. ++10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,181 Points Leslie Philibert (12/11/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Like the poem, the idea of mending a broke heart is not new, but you have worked this with care. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,190 Points Babatunde Aremu (12/11/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    A motivational poem. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (12/11/2012 6:07:00 AM)

    A positive state of mind great poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,689 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/13/2011 5:29:00 PM)

    these lines are expertly written
    it is hard to move out of the pain
    but you will come out of it in time
    nice poem
    nice thoughts to think of (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/24/2011 2:57:00 PM)

    Wisdom is not simple a gift but a virtue granted to a few ones gained through hard work and sacrifice and shared with the rest of the world! An excellent and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the world with your great works! Thanks for sharing! Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,460 Points Ken E Hall (4/7/2011 4:05:00 AM)

    Wisdom set forth in your words, time the essence on the road to repair and that other door to open...well said++++10...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gary Manning (11/8/2010 4:41:00 PM)

    Only thing wrong is I wish ther was more of it :) nice job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points David Beckham (8/16/2010 12:39:00 AM)

    Nice rhythm and flow to it laced with a powerful message. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Deborah Cromer (7/25/2009 9:01:00 PM)

    I like this for having a positive and upbeat message. Deborah Cromer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/9/2009 2:59:00 AM)

    'Then you'll be ready to start again
    and open, another door! '

    10 for this nice poem with nice ending. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (3/4/2009 5:39:00 PM)

    Your expression comforts with each line, that was written by a caring heart. Thank you for sharing 10+ (Report) Reply










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