A Broken Heart Poem by suzan gumush

A Broken Heart

Rating: 4.7


Comes too late to conquer my ambitions
Comes too late to stage my play
All that I've written is lost and gone
My memory is at a distance
Is all that I've forgotten
Maybe I did commit too many sins
That's why My life is near a bin
A broken heart is all I've been given
How much more
Can one take!
Maybe this is the life
I have been made for
Well I give no thanks!
I just can't take anymore!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Existential Despair 01 August 2008

The more I read this poem the more I kept finding myself hidden in it. Thanks for expressing pain the way it should, nice work!

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Robert Meadows 03 August 2008

How insightful. A precious look into a sorrowful soul. Very well written.

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Colin Jeffery 08 August 2008

A very moving poem. Brilliant

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Miguel Maria 09 August 2008

beautifully sad, it shows strong feelings in short i love it

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rohit sapra 09 August 2008

This poem is nice and talks about hope which sometimes seems to fade in us all.

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Romeo Della Valle 15 May 2011

A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! I hope you have the time to read my poem also titled: A BROKEN HEART and enjoy it! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 March 2009

A broken heart is very near and dear to God. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Ozzy Govea 14 October 2008

You can see you're pain in this poem, well written!

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Bonnie Collins 12 October 2008

This is a filled with alot of sadness, however a broken heart sometimes is one of Gods worst emotional roller coaster rides, we most, indure... Remember life will go on and somehow, someway try to develope a positive in your soal, it is painfull, but things happen for a reason, sometimes the worst of reasons, and always we may never know the answer immediatly, but as life travels us through many roads, one day, it will hit you as to why this happened.... Remember too, no one can take your memories even if they are from a broken heart.... Sweet write and enjoyed this much.. Bonnie

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Dereje Amera 12 October 2008

very heart touching poem, which goes deep down to heart to those who have broken hearts. This must be from personal experience, i just guess. Best

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